Huckleberry Finn by Mark Twain

You have to get your mind set right to enjoy this book, and it is a long complicated plot line. The beginning chapters establishe the silliness of Tom Sawyer and the innocent nature of Huckleberry Finn. Huck's calm observations about Tom's silly games (playing pirates and being blood brothers) have a humorous tone to them, but only if you realize that Twain is using Huck to make fun of the "romantic" novels that were popular during his day. Romantic here does not mean "love;" it means the type of writing where no one is actually hurt, where everything is seen through rosy colored glasses, and life always works out good.
Chapter 6 --Twain's description of Pap ranting and raving about the "govment," Pap's clear prejudice against negroes, and Pap's drunken rage when he chases Huck around the cabin are not funny. The chapter ends with Huck holding a gun for protection against his father.
Chapter 7--Pap leaves Huck alone and he decides to escape. As he kills the pig, drags the blood around, and creates a scene to look like he has been murdered, he comments that he wished "Tom Sawyer was there, I knowd he would take an interest in this kind of business, and throw in the fancy touches. Nobody could spread himself like Tom Sawyer in such a thing as that."
The Language: it's hard to get used to the spelling of Huck's voice unless you speak it out loud and can hear it. For example, Huck says "warn't" instead of "wasn't." He says "haint" instead of have not." Try to keep a list of the other phonetical spellings.
Nature: Note how most of Huck's troubles involve human beings--he manages the river, the woods, and nature quite well. Jim teaches him how to interact with humans--by Chapter 14 Huck is admiring Jim. He says about Jim: "he was most always right; he had an uncommon level head." Jim is also gentle about teaching Huck--when Huck plays a mean joke on him (Chapter 15), Jim scolds Huck (he calls Huck "trash") and teaches Huck how to be a decent human being. However, Jim is not educated: he believes a lot of superstitous stories and twists Bible stories quite a bit. Jim is also subservient to Huck in many instances.
Huck is a liar: Huck lies when it is convenient to him. Some of his lies are silly nonsense, others are to gain information or to protect himself and Jim. The first type of lies reflect Huck's immaturity, the second type are much more significant. Huck is trying to reconcile what he has been formally taught and what he knows in his heart to be true.
Chapter 17-18 reflects both types of lies as well as Huck's maturing process and tender heart. The chapter also includes satire of art and poetry--mark the section of the description of the house--we will return to that section when we study satire. Be sure to read these two chapters--the end of Ch. 18 includes a famous line: "there warn't no home like a raft, after all. Other places do seem so cramped up and smothery, but a raft don't. you feel mighty free and easy and comfortable on a raft."
Chapter 19: The two frauds (the Duke and the Dauphin) join up with Huck and Jim. Even though their characters are scoundrels, Twain uses them to illustrate a few other things: Huck understands human nature by the time these two "rapscallions" show up (end of Ch. 19). Townspeople along the river are poor, uneducated, and most of the time, quite accepting and friendly.
Chapter 23: A poignant scene at the end when Huck decides to "protect" Jim from the truth about the Duke and Dauphin and Jim recounts learning that his daughter was deaf.
Chapter 25-28: Huck ended Ch. 24 with "it was enough to make a body ashamed of the human race" so the reader is set up to understand that he does not approve of the new scam by the Duke and Dauphin. It also shows the tenderness between Huck and Mary Jane, whom he clearly admires.
Chapter 32: The first paragraph is a beautiful description of nature. But the true beauty is the second sentence in the second paragraph. Notice how long that sentence is!
End of the book: The early scenes with Tom Sawyer also set up the end of the book when Tom shows up again. Huck defers to Tom as a leader, even though it is clear that Huck is much more mature. Tom knows Jim is free, but he treats Jim's situation as game. Why Jim agrees to some of that nonsense is part of what makes the end of the book so unsatisfying.
While on the river, realized that Jim's feelings are just as significant as any white person's, and that Jim is probably one of the most decent human beings that ever drew breath (in a literary sort of way!).

Comments

Allie Larsen said…
My question asks to describe the role love-or lack of love- plays in each version of a family the book presents. Twain presents a version of family and unity between Huck Finn and Tom Sawyer. The "blood bonds" with these boys unite them together and their friendship is based on their love for adventure. The lack of love in Huck and his paps relationship leads to frequent beatings and Finn's ploy to escape. The love between Huck and Jim is the most family oriented in the book. Jim loves Huck and watches out for him throughout all plots in the story. Huck doesn't judge Jim and couldn't care less about Jim's color. The family bond they create on the river is most likely, the deepest Huck has ever known.
Hunter said…
From what I've read of the book, so far, I've noticed that Twain really nails the dialect aspect where each character is set apart in how he speaks. When Huck speaks and when Jim speaks, I can easily know who is speaking. Huck's words, though not always in the correct verb tense, are usually easy to read, as Jim's words are very broken. For example, this is how Jim speaks: "you's de bes' fren' Jim's ever had; e you's de only fren' ole Jim's got now." Also, Huck doesn't always speak in dialect. . . Twain must have written it for easier reading, in some places of the book, when Huck is not speaking in dialect?

In scenes, such as where a boat smashed right through Huck and Jim's raft, figurative language is used to place the image in mind of the boat breaking through the raft and sending Huck and Jim into the water. That was visual to me, at least. . . . Also, figurative language is seemingly used where Huck says, "the work of the rattlesnake-skin", where the snake skin is given human characteristics.

Twain appears to be consistent in Huck's grammar. For example, Huck will say "I knowed" and slangs such as "warn't" are used throughout the book. Twain keeps the verb tenses consistent when Huck is in dialect. Twain uses informal diction which includes wrong verb tenses(example: "then I done" and "I had wore"), problems in subject-verb agreement(example: "i begun"), double negatives(example: "wouldn't never"), regional colloquialisms(example: The word, "judged", is often used), slangs(example: t'other")and unorthodox spelling(example: "good-by"). These are just a few thoughts which are debatable. . . .
Mrs. Colley said…
Allie: Think about specific examples to support your observations. For example, how can you tell that Huck does not love his father? He has a chance to shoot his dad after Pap falls into a drunken sleep. Why doesn't he? Why do you think Jim takes so long to tell Huck that his Pap is dead? What is Huck's reaction to learning Pap is dead? (you'll have to read toward the end of the book to get here). Also, I think it would be incomplete to assert that Huck does not care about Jim's color. I think, in fact, that he does. Wouldn't you have explected a bigger response from Huck when he found out that the Duke and Daughpin has sold Jim?
In other words, you have made a lot of observations, but they don't appear to be based on conclusions from scenese. Try to focus on one or two aspects of love (maybe Huck/Jim and Huck/Pap) and point out different places where you observe their relationship. Note also that relationships can change. . .I think Huck's feelings for Jim change over the course of their trip. I also think that Huck is not as mature as we think he Why does he let Tom treat Jim in such a humiliating way?
Mrs. Colley said…
Hunter: Your observations are spot on about the dialect! (that's a good thing) Focus the info you bring up your first and third paragraph--the second one doesn't make much sense to me. Try to characterize Huck's voice--look at that list of tone words and see if you can identify different tones used by different characters in different places. OR focus on WHY Twain changes things up. In other words, what effect is accomplished when you compare Huck's dialect in Scene A with Huck's dialect in Scene B? (you choose the scenes. . but there needs to be a reason to connect them.) You don't have to encompass the entire book. Just select parts of it.
Mrs. Colley said…
Two students... two great beginnings. Post another comment as you focus on your responses. I'll try to help you tweak your observations. Are the other 19 of you out there?
Justin Williams said…
Huck's dialect and Jim's dialect differ but they but have the same basic feel to them. When Jim speaks it shows his lack of education. When Huck speaks it shows how young he is. Huck's words saved him many times because he is able to make up a lie pretty quickly and his lies usually work. Mark Twain uses this to show that even though they are different they still have some things in common.
When Huck is speaking Twain uses dialect but when Huck is narrating Twain mostly uses regular language.
Mohamed said…
The language Twain used to write this book is far different than the language used by other authors. Twains usage of this country, ignorant dialect gives the affect of Huck Finn truly narrating the story himself. By using Huck's voice, the story clearly indicates that Huck is uneducated...grammatically.However, Huck is capable of hunting, fishing, and providing for himself, by himself. An advantage of these colloquialisms used by Twain is that the material is humorus and may be enjoyed by the audience familiar with that form of dialect. The disadvantages may be that some people may be offended by the constant use of the "N" word and may not understand the dialect. I find the book quite interesting yet contrasting to the point of reading. Reading builds vocabulary and increases proper grammatical knowledge, whereas this book has misspelled and improper words.
Jonathan P> said…
I find Twain's descriptions (given through Huck) to be oddly unique, in a way that he describes inanimate subjects in a human-like fashion, such as when he describes the river waking up and falling asleep (pg. 114).
I also thought the way Twain encourages foreshadowing was interesting (on page 91)when he literally spells out that more bad luck was soon to come.
Jana Wheeler said…
So far, the dialect has been pretty easy to understand as long as I am going slow with the book. There are several words I have to try to decipher. The dialect Twain uses for Huck is pretty easy to read, but when Jim speaks I have to try and understand him by reading his sentences over and over again.

My point to address is Huck and Jim's primary movement from shore to river and north to south with relation to the plot. I have noticed, so far, most of the trouble they run into has happened on shore. But I am kind of confused as to where Tom went.
Josie Raley said…
My question asks to point out how Twain's critical attitude towards religion is revealed. In the first chapter Huck is having a bible story read to him by the widow. After she tells him bout Moses Huck makes the comment "...,because I don't take no stock in dead people." This indicates Twain's attitude is slightly less fond of religion. Taking interest in a dead person seems like an illogical thing to do because if they are dead they can in no way help you out.
In chapter four Huck is talking to his father who showed up in his room and his father says "First you know you'll get religion, too." Having Huck's father saying this casts a bad shadow on religion. His father though is a drunk seems as though he would be angry or disappointed that his son would be interested in religion. Having religion and disappointment paired together indicates Twain's harsh feelings towards this subject.
In chapter eight Huck is talking about prayer about how it really only works for the right kind of person. Having this view gives religion a hypocritical view. God is suppose to accept all and love all but having Huck tell us really only the right kind have prayer answers gives a bad view onto the idea.
Blair said…
My question asks what scenes interrupt the storyline (which is Huck and Jim's journey down the river). The first scene that interrupts their journey (starts on page 54) is when they stop of at St. Petersburg. Huck dresses up like a girl and tries to find out whatever information he can about what has been happening in town. In this scene, I noticed how quick on his feet is when Huck comes up with his wild tales. This is a humorous element in the book because he is able to convince adults of his crazy stories. However, he has to keep changing them to match the previous because he forgets what he has already said. I was also asked to find the effect of the interrupting scenes, but I am not sure really how to describe the effect. I think it gives you a break from the central narrative and redirects your mind to small new adventures along their long journey that is an adventure in its self. I did notice that when the woman in St. Petersburg was talking about Huck’s murder, she tells about the suspicions of Jim. When ever Huck goes back to camp Huck tells Jim, “They’re after us!” They were really after Jim, but it is evident that Huck and Jim are working and staying together. From this and when they were floating down the river, and Huck had Jim lay under the blanket so he wouldn’t get caught, Huck can put most prejudice aside and do what he feels is right even though others do not feel the same.
Paige Lemily said…
Twain does not spare us from hearing the rough dialect that was used in Huck's day and age. Even though many of the words used in this book seem ignorant and offending to us as we read, you can easily tell that these words meant little to nothing when they were slung around back to that point in time. Twain thought it was important for us to really understand the setting and time in which Huck grew up in. It really shows how great of a character Huck has to defy what is deemed wrong in society and to do what he feels is right in his heart.
Mrs. Colley said…
Justin W: It would be an easy assumption to declare that Jim (as a slave) would not be educated. You need to focus on what Jim says that indicates that he was very wise. Also, what does Huck say that proves that he understands human nature, even though Huck is not "educated"? In other words, Twain is making a comment on the nature of education: you can be very smart without necessarily going to school.
Mrs. Colley said…
MJ: You need to focus on supplying examples to support what you conclude. Identify some colloquialisms. (Most of the rest of your comment is fluffy.) See my comments left to Justin W. for further explanation.
Mrs. Colley said…
JP: You've hit on a major point. Forget the part you wrote about foreshadowing (which is a literature thing) and concentrate on how Huck's observations of nature seem poetic. In other words, why would Twain have Huck be so uneducated, so ignorant, yet so in tune with nature? Find a few specific instances where Huck admires nature or describes it beatifully.
Mrs. Colley said…
JP: You've hit on a major point. Forget the part you wrote about foreshadowing (which is a literature thing) and concentrate on how Huck's observations of nature seem poetic. In other words, why would Twain have Huck be so uneducated, so ignorant, yet so in tune with nature? Find a few specific instances where Huck admires nature or describes it beatifully.
Mrs. Colley said…
Jana: Don't worry about Tom Sawyer. When Huck staged his death, he ran away. (Tom conveniently reappears at the end of the book.) I'm glad you are reading more slowly and thoroughly, even if you don't get the entire book finished. Focus on why you think Twain has Huck experience trouble on land, but little trouble when he is on the river (unless you count the dead body he sees on the floating houseboat as trouble). Why does Twain often have Huck experience thigns while Jim stays on the river? (some of the stories on shore don't include Jim at all)
Mrs. Colley said…
Josie: How does Huck's view of religion differ from the people around him? Why does he feel like he is wrong to have the opinion he does, even though we as readers see that he has a truer, purer belief in God than those with organized religion? I'm not sure what you mean when you are talking about the dead people; I'm also not sure what you mean by "having religion and disappointment paired together indicates Twain's harsh feelings." Be careful when you conclude what Twain did and did not feel. Huck is the narrator of the story. Be sure to differentiate between the voice of the child and the voice of the author.
Mrs. Colley said…
Blair: The beginning of your comments is really excellent: the scene when Huck pretends to be a girl is quite famous. (there is also an irony there because the woman thinks she is so smart because she thinks she has figured out Huck's lies. All the while she has no clue.) You're on the right track when you say that the side adventures seem to be entertainment and distract the reader from the main storyline, which is Jim's escape and Huck running away from an abusive parent. However, the scene with the Grangerfords/Shepherdsons is not humorous. So what purpose does it serve since it does not forward Huck and Jim's journey? See if you can find 3-4 scenes that do not seem to have much to do with Huck and Jim's journey, then try to conclude why Twain would include those scenese. You've got the first one: for humor.
Mrs. Colley said…
Paige: I am not sure what you are trying to say. You claim that Twain "thought it was really important for us to understand the setting and the time." Remember that Twain was writing about HIS time. The book was set in contemporary time for Twain. It isn't that he was writing about the past. I'm not sure what you mean that the words mean "little or nothing" because that seems to contradict what you said about the setting a specific time and place. Can you be specific about which words you are referencing? Try to examine a few specific things rather than focus on sweeping, but vague, remarks.
Jenny said…
It is very hard to judge exactly which sentence is the most important in the novel. The sentence that I found that represents the novel is the last sentence in chapter thirty: ". . . we had a long gabble, and I told Jim everything." This sentence appeals to pathos. Twain wrote this sentence in a way that it is happy in tone yet serious. These tones are represented throughout the book. "Gabble" gives a light cheerful tone, while the rest of the sentence is straightforward. Huck wants to help Jim, but sometimes the only way to help Jim is to keep him in the dark of events. This sentence brings out major aspects of the book in terms of friendship and lying, whether to protect or not.
Molly said…
Initially, I started off by reading the first few chapters of Huckleberry Finn. However, I found that in order to really understand the dialect, hearing the book on CD was a more efficient means of doing so. This allowed me to hear each character's lingo and decipher between them. I must say, Mark Twain did an excellent job of giving each character their own originality through their accents. For example, it became apparent to me that Jim is very uneducated and speaks bad English with a strong accent: "Yo' ole father doan' know yit what he's a-gwyne to do."

In using dialects, Mark Twain presents readers an accurate feel of the differences between society then and society today.
Mrs. Colley said…
Jenny: Yours is probably the best post about the book that I have read so far. You narrowed your focus to one specific sentence, but your explanation encompasses several major aspects of the book. To improve upon your explanation: I'd like to see you delete "Twain wrote this in a way. . ." since that really doesn't explain much. You could also expound on what you mean by pathos, and also give specifics to support your comment about sometimes it's best to lie to protect someone. Good job.
Mrs. Colley said…
Molly: You know better than to say that "Twain did a really good job. . ." Of course he did! You saying so doesn't really explain much. Also, your observations about dialect are really kind of hollow--yes, a slave during the 1860's would be uneducated. That's sort of obvious. And, now, dear Molly, about your last sentence: it doesn't make much sense given that Mark Twain had no idea of what "society today" would be like. How could he present the readers with anything to do with 2011 when he died a hundred years ago?
Cullen said…
This novel combines the terms bildungsroman and picaresque from the very beginning. This whole novel is about the picaresque of a young boy named Huckleberry Finn. If a person thinks about the story line, he or she would start to think that this story is a lot more than an escaped slave and a boy going down the Mississippi. Their adventure shows how their life changes from the beginning to the end. From a philosophic out look, Huck Finns' journey down the Mississippi is really his transition from an adolescent to a young adult.
William Gonzalez said…
Humor was not present in this book because I was trying too hard to understand the dialect. An exaggeration example in this book that sticks out to me was "I was itching in eleven different places." If you have ever experienced this then you already know that it is not really in eleven places. If I understood the humor then I would imagine that this would be one of the most funniest parts of the beginning of the book.
Kayla Afrin said…
In the scene where Huck has to decide if he will stay loyal to his friend, Jim, or to stay loyal to his race. Twain used an abstract sentence to display the sentence that the story could not live with out. "All right, then, I'll go to Hell" is a short but powerful sentence. Huck would be willing to sacrifice his soul to save Jim. It implies that in the story Huck has matured and that he has set his own values that are not based on what is expected. He sets his friendship with Jim as powerful as Hell, if not more. Huck is more afraid of losing his only one true friendship then of sending his soul to Hell.
Brittany Hoff said…
I just finished the book a couple of minutes ago and I have to say, I rather enjoyed it. I was expecting this really difficult book because of the dialect but Twain made it pretty easy to understand. I took my time while reading the conversations and that helped a lot.

One main point, I noticed, was the use of superstition. On page 45, Jim tells Huck to not count the things you are going to cook for dinner because that would bring bad luck. He also states that if a man owns a beehive and he dies the bees must be informed before sun-up next morning or else the bees would die. Another superstition that he refers to at the end of the book is that if you have hairy arms and a hairy breast you are going to be rich. At the beginning of the book Jim is poor, but then at the end he turns out to be rich and tells Huck, "I tole you I ben rich wunst, en gqineter be rich ag'in; en it's come true; en heah she is!"

My question is about the conclusion of the novel and if I think it is appropriate or not. The ending is definitely disappointing. Twain could have elaborated more and made it more interesting. The last couple pages were all a blur because I didn't really want to read it anymore because of it being so dull. I would have rather a longer ending as long as it was more intriguing.
Alyssa said…
The most obvious language device in this book is dialect. Jim's speech can be very difficult to understand, I would imagine that reading slowly would be the first strategy you would take, but reading it faster and not focusing so hard on the words makes it easier too understand. Twain uses this complicated dialect because if you read aloud that's exactly what he wants Jim to sound like if he were to talk to you.

I noticed that Twain will begin explaining certain things in detail like "The door of the cavern was big enough to roll a hogshead through it... and then the sentence will end with something so basic, like "So we built it there and cooked dinner". This shows how intelligent and observant Huck really is, but then again it shows how simple life was for Huck. This also created a sense of detail so the reader will feel and see what the character see, but also not boring them to death, and by getting to the point.

I definitely found parts of this book humerous. I really enjoyed the part where Huck dressed up as a girl and the lady caught him and kept his secret. By injecting the book with humor it really tones down the serious and intense feelings the other scenarios present.
Mrs. Colley said…
Cullen: I have no idea what you are trying to say in your post. You don't seem to understand the two terms that you mention. Your final statement is vague enough that it could appear as a blurb on the back of a book. Try to be specific when you commment. Choose one point to make and then explain it using specifics from the book. You are too brief.
Mrs. Colley said…
Kayla: I have no idea what this means: "Twain used an abstract sentence to display the sentence that the story could not live with out."
Mrs. Colley said…
Brittany: You start your comment well, but then drift into being too vague. Forget your discussion about the ending of the book. I don't think we're going to make it that far. So, let's go back to your observations about superstitions. Why does Twain include them in the text? How does his use of superstitions help draw character? (in order to answer this you'll need to find a few more examples of superstitions in the book. Remember: this course is about observing HOW an author write and THE EFFECT of his choice.
Mrs. Colley said…
Alyssa: You state that "Twain uses this complicated dialect because if you read aloud that's exactly what he wants Jim to sound like if he were to talk to you." That doesn't make much sense for an explanation, given that Twain did not write the book as a read aloud book. However, why don't you pursue "complicated dialect" as an idea? What do you mean by "complicated"? What is the difference between dialect and colloquial? Next, your observation "This also created a sense of detail so the reader will feel and see what the character see, but also not boring them to death, and by getting to the point" is sort of pointless, too. Try to explain HOW an author create a sense of detail. . .and to tell the honest truth, there is probably no author who was worried about "boring" his audience. Another avenue for you to explore might be what effect does humor have? In other words, why does Twain use humor at all?
Tyler L said…
I am not sure if this technique is classified as literary or language, but I do not think anyone else has brought this up, or may even know about it. At the beginning of the book, Huck states, "You don't know about me without you have read a book by the name of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer." After that, he tells about how he was in a book. When a character knows he's in a book, this is referred to as "breaking the fourth wall." This, in a way, makes the bond between reader and character slightly closer, and perhaps warms them up to the character, as it did with me and Huck in this book.

Another technique I noticed is the use of added "unneeded" information between dashes. It really lets us in on Huck's personality/humor and makes the book more humorous, if you were to notice it. Some examples include, on page 23/24' "Every time he got drunk . . . he raised Cain and he got jailed. He was just suited - this kind of thing was right in his line." And also, "Pap warn't in good humor - so he was his natural self." It's sort of like he's adding in his sarcastically toned two-cents.
Amber said…
Twain portrays Huck in the beginning of the book as quite immature. On page nine, Huck is recruited to join Tom Sawyer's Gang. In the midst of his eagerness and childish crave for getting attention and being superior, he exchanges Miss Watson's life just so he could join. On page 206, Huck is positioned in a debate between whether or not informing Miss Watson about where Jim was located. "All right, then, I'll go to hell.... And for a starter I would go to work and steal Jim out of slavery... as long as I was in, and in for good, I might as well go the whole log." this paragraph is so vital because it illustrates how Twain has made this character grow morally from being a childish Huck to a mature Huckleberry.

Huck is set out for an adventure. His journey includes going down the Mississippi River, Jackson's Island, and the steamboat. These are all examples of how Huck is the picaro of the story. In each stop he made to reach his destination, he experienced something vital and matured through the process.
Justin Siegner said…
My topic is to find devices that Mark Twain used and the humorous effect on the storyline. Well one of the biggest examples comes from Jim in the first few chapters of the book. Tom Sawyer finds Jim asleep under a tree then steals his hat and places it on branches above him. Almost immediately it is revealed that Jim blames this on witches and creates an enormous tall tale that spreads throughout the state. This rumor turns Jim into a sort of legend amongst African Americans, some coming from all over just to see him. Mark Twain uses this as a humorous device because he lets the reader in on the truth and demonstrates how it escalates to such a level. Although humorous, later Jim runs away because he discovers that a man has offered $800 for him; the high price could have been because of Jim’s reputation amongst slaves, and because of the high price the owner of Jim actually was going to sell him, so there is a chance that Jim’s tall tale was what caused him to join Huck in the following chapters. Later, when Huck is finding information in town while Jim stays on the island, the woman, to whom he pretends to be a woman to, discovers his disguise. As Huck goes to leave, she calls him a variety of names which exaggerates the fact that she doesn’t know his real name as a joke of sorts. Other examples show up throughout the book, although some do not come across as humorous due to the time in which the book was written.
Paige Lemily said…
Another thing I'd like to add to my other comment is, even though it is apparent that Jim is made out to be the least educated character in this story, due to his barely understandable dialect, and his naivety at times. I feel Jim says the most sincere, honest, and passionate words. The few lines that really made me feel negatively towards Huck is when Jim told Huck that he was the best friend he had ever had, and that Huck was the only person who has even kept a promise to him. Even though Huck is a normal teenager, who does have an attitude, you can see how strong the bond between such different people has grown.
Paige Lemily said…
Another thing I'd like to add to my other comment is, even though it is apparent that Jim is made out to be the least educated character in this story, due to his barely understandable dialect, and his naivety at times. I feel Jim says the most sincere, honest, and passionate words. The few lines that really made me feel negatively towards Huck is when Jim told Huck that he was the best friend he had ever had, and that Huck was the only person who has even kept a promise to him. Even though Huck is a normal teenager, who does have an attitude, you can see how strong the bond between such different people has grown.
Jana Wheeler said…
All right, I am getting the hang of reading these character's dialects.

At first, I was confused as to why Huck and Jim were traveling South because slaves are free in the North. I think it is because they're not intending on landing in a town actually in the South, rather a town in the North just farther South than they were. If that's wrong, could someone please help me understand this part? But it is essential to the book that they are heading South, because then their stop in the free town is missed and that's where the storyline really comes from. Throughout their back and forth trips from shore to river, most trouble is on shore. The reason Twain does not have Jim and Huck experiencing trouble on the river is that is the time Huck and Jim have to develop their relationship. This is how we find out that Jim is actually intelligent just very uneducated. We learned early on in the book that Huck is also uneducated and he is presented with many chances to pursue an education but has no interest in it. I noticed several times in the book when his superstition was mentioned. If he really believes that counting your dinner or killing spiders is bad luck, then that is what he relies on. He does not try to learn about the world or about "luck" itself. I might now be rambling, but his superstitions in this book seemed to highlight his lack of intelligence.
john duque said…
my question asks to note examples of poor grammer, slang or regional colloquialisms, humorous observations, unexpected eloquence in description. Twain's use of language is tricky. i dont believe i could read this book in 6th grade, sorry Mrs. Colley, but to understand his characters u must read it as if you where Huck Finn. Huck narates the book and uses alot of southern uneducated slang and coloquialisms. Twain starrts his book off with "You don’t know about me without you have read a book by the name of The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, but that ain’t no matter." this is probably the most noted use of colloquialism because it is the beginning of the book. Twain's use of poor grammer intensifies the ignorance of his characters by showing the reader how they communicate with each other, a perfect example would be jim jim constantly uses poor grammer throughout the book. all in all it was an interesting book, ofcourse i havent read the entire book, because i skipped the end. as mrs. colley instructed. but i believe i will find the time to do so.
Mrs. Colley said…
Tyler: I'd like to hear more about breaking that fourth wall. Can you explain the other three walls? And how does it bring you "closer" to the character? What does that mean? It is interesting that Huck "knows" he's in a book---look at the last sentence, too. It seems he is directly addressing his audience, there, too, doesn't it?
Mrs. Colley said…
Amber: Your first paragraph is just a summary of plot. Your second paragraph is really, really vague. Try to pick a particular passage and comment on it. Ask yourself what the author's intent was (or see other suggestions posted at the assignment page on my website).
Mrs. Colley said…
Justin S: I like the passage you selected to discuss--about the "legend" that Jim becomes in the other slaves' minds. Try to thiink about the passage from a different perspective. Why did Twain include it? What purpose does it serve? (The rest of your comment seems to be summary.)
Mrs. Colley said…
Jana: Your comments about Jim being intelligent but uneducated are on point. You might want to select a portion of the book (perhaps the spider story or another superstition) and see how Twain uses it to help us understand Jim (or Huck) more. You might want to explain how Twain draws Jim as intelligent without really telling us that he is. One way is through telling us of Jim's superstitions. What are other ways that we can tell Jim is intelligent? (don't get into a discussion about the fact that he is--focus on how Twain creates tht understanding in the reader)
Mrs. Colley said…
John: You might want to explore the idea of communication more. How does Twain have Huck and Jim communicate besides through dialogue? In other words, how does the reader know that Jim and Huck understand each other (and what happens when they do not?) Look for ways a writer can create the effect of communication--one way is through dialogue. What are others?
Mrs. Colley said…
To Everyone: Think about this: Why do you think that Twain has Jim "disappear" for entire chapters in the book? What effect do those parts have on the text as a whole? Keep trying with your comments. You can get this language analysis down with practice!
Allie Larsen said…
(Second Comment)
In Huck Finn, Twain successfully models many versions of a family. From Huck and Pap's relationship to Huck and Jim's, I see the vast difference that love plays in each. Huck is Pap's biological son which should clearly opens doors to love. As I first started the book, I saw Pap abandon Huck multiple times for drinks, nights out, and serving jail time. I thought "Somehow Pap loves Huck,right? How can you not find love for your own offspring?" As I've read more, I do believe that Huck loves his father and his father loves him. It is shown to me when Huck has a hint of hope his father has changed after his promise to the Judge, his reaction to his Pap's death, and even by giving his money to his father to support his bad addiction.Pap's love(however minute it may be)is shown when he is on the boat looking for Huck's dead remains. The love role plays is more hidden in this "family" relationship, but it does exist.
Love's role in Jim and Huck's version of family unravels throughout the story. What started as partners in crime, led to an understanding of one another. Both characters struggle to find their way in society and both are hardly accepted. Jim and Huck run into each other while searching for a better life. This connects more and more throughout the book as we watch them help each other achieve their ending goal. Jim is protective over Huck when hiding the dead man's identity and shows trust in him as he follows Huck's over the top and silly adventures. Huck's love for Jim is shown when Huck decides that he can't bring himself to turn Jim in, even if he "goes to hell" for it. He struggles with his upbringings telling him it is wrong to help a black man escape, but lets his heart get the best of him as he declares he is willing to take any punishment in order to help Jim become free. In Huck's ignorance, he shows his love for Jim in helping him escape. I believe the connection Huck finds with Jim is all he's been looking for and helps him grow up throughout the plot line.
Molly said…
Throughout the entire novel, Mark Twain effectively uses satire to bring forth the humor of the hypocrisy amongst the people in Midwestern societies. For example, in Chapter 1, Huck says, “by and by they fetched the n****** in and had prayers, and then everybody was off to bed." In this way, Mark Twain mocks the Widow's devout Christian ways, by showing that despite her attempts to be a good person, she still owns slaves.
Another example of satire is how Mark Twain pokes fun at the level of knowledge of the characters. For instance, when Huck sneaks out to go meet up with Tom Sawyer and his gang, a discussion arises about "ransoming". None of the boys know what the word means exactly, so they each decide what it should mean, despite it being not necessarily true. This is also a prime example that in society, ideas can be thought to be true if others accept the idea, even if it is truly wrong.
Molly said…
In addition to my last comment:
Overall, the satire provides for a comical effect in the novel, lightening the mood and adding a twist of tongue-in-cheek humor between the reader and the author.
Jonathan P> said…
I found it awkward that the
Southern dialect contains words with syllables added to them, such as "a-coming", while other words have syllables taken out of them, such as "'bout".
In addition to what Molly said about humor, I enjoyed the attempt by the duke to act out Shakespeare's Hamlet soliloquy, in which he adds in parts of Macbeth apart from his corrupted version. Though he does not exactly hit the nail on its head, his ability to recognize sections of the soliloquy as well as his ability to act out the scene (which Huck highly regards) makes it reasonable to conclude that the duke is educated in theater.
Twain also casts a negative view on organized religion. The camp meetings associated with the religious revival, in particular, are looked down upon when the con artists tricks the people attending the meeting. Huck remarks that the people's actions were "just crazy and wild." These two general words hint at the overall outlook on organized religion. The point Molly made about Mrs. Watson owning a slave also places a burden on organized religion because she can be considered one of the purest characters in the book.
Mrs. Colley said…
Jonathan: I think your observatiosn about adding and omitting syllables show just how capricious our language can be. You also probably have an advantage over the other readers who have not studied Macbeth! (plus, I know you had an awesome teacher for it). That Shakespeare scene could also support a more general declaration that the duke is intelligent, both in academics and in understanding the human mind/heart (because he can swindle people so easily!). That gets to be more literary, however, so we'll leave that alone.
Hunter said…
While randomly flipping through the book, I stumbled across paragraph 6 of chapter 9. This paragraph contains very descriptive diction of the storm that is taking place. The insightful details given by Huck are beyond that of a 14 year old boy (similar to what we talked about, in the other passage, during class). The observations made, for example, of how the color of the sky would turn so dark having a "blue-black" color, how it would suddenly change to be "as bright as glory", and the thunder "with an awful crash, and then go rumbling, grumbling, tumbling, down the sky towards the under side of the world. . . .", truly required much thought that is not usually demonstrated by most boys of Huck's age.

Huck's tone in this passage appears to be quite awestruck and ardent when he describes the colors of the sky. The tone throughout the passage also seems, to me, as though it is both melancholy and peaceful in that the thunder storm makes the scene so somber, yet so beautiful and calm. The figurative diction used really magnifies the scene, making the visual aspects of the scene very sublime.
Justin Williams said…
The sounds used in chapter 1 around paragraph 8 express a grim tone. Phrases such as "an owl, away off, who-whooing about a dead person", "the leaves rustled in the woods ever so mournful", "a dog crying about someone that was going to die", "that sound a ghost makeswhen it wants to tell about something...and can't make itself understood so it can't rest easy in its grave, and has to go about that way every night grieving" all give me the image of death and fear which makes Huck's position appear to be hopeless.
Paige Lemily said…
Allie’s comment did hit on Huck and Pap’s relationship, but I don’t believe Huck’s love for Pap is hidden at all. Clearly, Pap was very vulnerable every time he drank, which was often, and if Huck really had no love beyond the natural “father-son” love for his father, he could have easily taken advantage of his situation in all of the wrong ways. Even Jim could see that Huck did care about his father, as he knew that it was Pap’s dead body they found, so he lied to protect Huck’s heart. You can also see all of the traits that Huck picked up from his father that he found valuable to know, such as stealing (not necessarily anything worth stealing), lying, and definitely an attitude. Through all of their arguments Huck never crosses the line, and he never quite seems to let go of his father’s presence. You would have to be blind not to see that Huck admires his father in some sense.
Jenny said…
I have selected the first five paragraphs of chapter 16. There are a couple colloquilialisms that stick out such as when Huck says the five big "wigwams" and a "trading-scow". In the first paragraph, where the word "amounted" is italicized, it gives an impression that Huck is smug saying that just because the raft is great that he is great because he is on it. In the fifth paragraph, where the words "I" and "me" are italicized, it emphasizes that Huck doesn't believe that he should be blamed for Jim being free. The tone of this passage starts of as a calm tone with the description of the river. Then, towards the end of the passage the tone is bitter with a word choice of "scorched" and "blame".
Cullen said…
In the second and third paragraphs Twain uses diction to show that Hucks gang is just little kids looking to have fun. He made the children seem chivalric to the ladies. This was evident when Tom said that they would ransom the women and spare their lifes but they did not even know what ransom meant. Twain also made them seem kiddish when Tom said that "they have to do it by the book" which the books definition was wrong. Twain also used their imagination as children when they "fight against the A-rabs" and the only way to beat a genie was to use another genie. Twains chose of words in these too paragraphs indicates that Huck is just a little kid.
Brittany said…
The growing friendship between Huck and Jim is well displayed throughout the novel. In chapter 15, after Huck finds Jim and the raft, Twain demonstrates how much Jim already cares for Huck by using exclamatory sentences when Jim sees that Huck is still alive. Jim calls Huck "honey" and says "de same ole Huck, thank to goodness" which contributes to the fact that he is excited to see Huck alive and well.

Twain creates this situation to show how Jim cares more for Huck than Huck does for Jim at the beginning of the book because Huck uses it to fool Jim. Huck leads Jim to believe that they were never separated and the events from the previous night never happened. Huck feeds off of what Jim says to make him even more confused to the point where he believes none of it ever happened. In the third paragraph before the end of the chapter Jim realizes that Huck was lying for his own comic relief. Twain uses the anaphora of "en" to emphasize how upset Jim was when he thought Huck was dead and how happy he was when Huck was back on the raft.

In chapter 31, Huck gets away from the Duke and the Dauphin and hurriedly made his way to where the raft was only to discover Jim was not there. Huck states, "I set up a shout--and then another--and then another one". Twain uses repetition to create a hectic tone which shows that Huck is worried about Jim and his whereabouts. He continues to say "old Jim was gone" at the end of a long sentence. This sets a disappointed tone. Showing that Huck now cares for Jim.

Later on in that chapter Huck has to decide if he is going to turn Jim in or not and says, "All right, then, I'll go to hell," and proceeded to tear up the note he was going to send to Mrs. Watson. The actions and words Twain has Huck say demonstrates the love Huck feels for Jim, which by the end of the book is equal to the love Jim feels for Huck.
Jana Wheeler said…
One particular passage I read through a few times is in "You Can't Pray a Lie" when Huck is struggling with the thought of telling Jim's owner of Jim's whereabouts. In this internal struggle, I honed my focus to the syntax Twain uses.
Throughout the book, Twain often uses long sentences with multiple clauses separated by semi-colons, commas and hyphens. One thing that stuck out was the paragraph in the middle of page 205 that begins "It made me shiver." The first several sentences actually do not contain multiple clauses. As Huck is identifying his feelings and searching for answers in rhetorical questions, the sentences Twain chooses are very abrupt. But as Huck begins to explain why the words for his prayer would not come, the sentences he uses grow in length.
His first, abrupt sentences express individual thoughts and questions addressing his mood and what he was to do about it. When Huck starts to answer his own questions is when his sentences grow into one complete thought.
The structure of sentences is something I notice often. When Huck says "You can't pray a lie-I found that out" that last clause is what really resonates. We know what it is that Huck found out rather than just knowing he found something out. Twain could have easily written "I found out that you can't pray a lie" but it would not have had the same effect.
Blair said…
Chapter 11, Twain uses the scene of Huck pretending to be a girl as a humorous element in the book that distracts from the main narrative. It is humorous in the way that Twain has Huck concocts imaginative lies/stories to find out information for him and Jim. Twain uses irony the most in the last paragraph on page 60. When the woman thinks she knows everything about Huck but has not figured out that his new explanation is just another lie.

Huck's tone in this passage seems very innocent. I am not sure an exact example to use to confirm this though, any suggestions? I have a few ideas; I am not sure how to formulate them into logical sentences. Twain does use this scene though, to tie back in the calico dress and the sun bonnet Huck stole from the house that Pap was found dead (pg. 50, par. 2).
Tyler L said…
The term "fourth wall" actually comes from the three-walled box set stages. The fourth wall is the imaginary wall at the front of the stage. They called it, "breaking the fourth wall" because when an actor spoke directly to the audience, usually for dramatic or comedic effect, the boundary of this fourth wall was "broken." Some times, breaking this boundary is used to emphasize/de-emphasize specific aspects of the work of art. It was carried over from the stage to T.V. programs, films, and also comics. The way I feel doing so brings you closer to the character is that it seems more personal and, most of the time, the tone is friendlier. The character is talking directly to the reader, making them not a stranger. I'm wondering if how he talks most of the time in the book, could be considered breaking the fourth, I'm not too sure. It's definitely apparent in the statement I previously posted about it, though. I think this could be considered a language device, but I'm not sure. What do you think, Mrs. Colley? And could you please tell me an explanation on why you think it is what you think it is?
Justin S said…
I picked the passage in chapter 2 where Jim creates a grand tall tale after Tom plays a trick on Jim in his sleep. Twain sets up Jim's character as a very superstitious man in this passage. This is revealed in how just a little thing like his hat being placed off of his head leads him to the idea that he creates. Twain also further emphasizes on the craziness of the idea with a long sentence that captures Jim's description of the coin. Also, this long sentence, although perfectly structured, puts forth the idea of a run on sentence, illustrating the way Jim thought of the story of the coin and how it seems as though that he made it up as he went.
Kayla Afrin said…
I agree with what Paige mentioned about Allie's comment, Huck's love for his father is not hidden. There are many examples of how Huck portrays his love for him. Huck may not be bold by telling his father he "loves him", but the very lack of boldness that Huck has to his father clearly shows that Huck does love him. As we discussed in class, the examples of how Twain used very short and abrupt sentences to display the dialect between Huck and his father displays the lack of boldness to his father. Huck shows respect towards his father, but not to Jim. Hence, that point that Huck portrays a greater love for his father than for Jim (at least in the beginning).On the other hand, Jim shows extreme love for Huck. As Paige had mentioned about how Jim had hid Huck father's death from Huck not only displays the love that Huck has for his father, but the love Jim displays for Huck.

To add on to my first blog post:
Twain uses an abstract sentence, a short but powerful sentence, to display the most important sentence in the novel. Huck's love for Jim, Huck maturing, the current beliefs of society and how Huck disapproves of them and he follows his own can all be symbolized in the one sentence "Alright then, I'll go to hell".

Also I like to add that Twain used many different tones in his writing. Each chapter had a different effect. Some had more of a melancholy tone and others were flippant. For example the way Twain talked about the "dead body" in chapter eight and nine portrayed a depressing tone(since the foreshadowing of Huck finding out it is his father)and in chapter 10 portraying a flippant tone about how Huck is the reason why Jim gets bit by a snake, sets a great contrast between the three chapters.Twain used contrast to emphasized the different tones in his paragraph and chapter structure.
Kayla Afrin said…
Just kidding with my comment about it symbolizing! Literary thing got it, got! I meant it can be interpreted from.
Mohamed Kassim said…
I believe I now have a better understanding about the language Twain uses in the book. The majority of the characters in the book have there own form of dialect and It made it easy for me to know who was speaking at different points in the book. An example of that would be Huck speaking: "Jim throwed some old rags over him, be he needn't done it.." (Chapter 9 pg 50 line 5). Hucks father speaks in this manner : "Your mother couldn't read, and she couldn't write,nuther, before she died...I ain't the man to stand it-you hear?".(Chapter 5 lines 27-31)
Also Huck's friend Jim speaks in this manner : "Whar is you? Dog my cats ef I didn' hear sumf'n.

It also seemed to me as if the older characters used more of the regional colloquialisms than Huck...For example Hucks father says: "Who told you you might meddle with such hifalut'n foolishness, hey?" And then Sherburn says in chapter 22: "And if you hadn't had him to start you, you'd 'a' taken it out in blowing." Maybe the reason I thought that Twain used more colloquialisms from the older characters was because they spent more time using those colloquialisms, and Huck's adolescence, plus the time spent with the intelligent widow may be the cause of a smaller use of colloquialisms(even though he still has the dialect)

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